The Visit In Space And On Earth
3, 2, 1 whooosh!! it was 1961 in America inside a space rocket. My space rocket was as skinny as a pencil. When my rocket started to take off into space I was shaking so hard like there was thunder under my rocket ship. My face brushed back like a really strong hair dryer washing me back, and after that I saw a camera, and I knew my caregiver was watching me through the camera at me. Coco the space chimp.
I didn’t know what to say to my caregiver in the camera in front of me, I was only 12 years old until I left my caregiver to discover new stars for 65 years so there is enough time to look at new stars and to experience what is it like in space full of stars.
In the past years I tried to talk to my caregiver in the camera in front of me, I just really wanted to speak to him so I tried everything to turn the camera on but I was to late. Well I was in space for 65 years I was so tired I fell straight into sleeping. 65 years past, well my breathing was as slow as if I were going to die. Until a patch of light came shining at my face.
I was trying to open my eyes so I can see what is happening outside my space rocket, so I did. I saw the greatest glory of my life, my home, my beautiful home. I started to come to my rough landing on earth with my big parachute floating on the top of my rocket. Until I stopped with complete silence on the ground. “I’m alive? I’m alive!.”
My face turned red as I was absolutely disappointed and depressed because my home is a disaster. “Hello!” My voice echoed thru the empty city. I looked around with a confused face. “Is anyone here? Silence is all I could hear. I was thinking in my head Did I hear something?. Someone replied.
“Ooohhh Ahhh,” that means hello in chimp language, “hello young fellow.
Ummm “hello wait who are you”, I said to that mysterious chimp. “I am Corex who are you and what are you doing on my Victory land” the chimp said. “Victory land?” I thought to myself. I am here to get my old life back and see my family again. “Wait a minute you look exactly like that chimp on a man’s shirt”.
Oh interesting…
Hold on, “have you seen a man wearing a blue t-shirt with kind of like a ginger hear?.” “yes I’m pretty sure I have seen a person like that.” I sprinted right up to Corex with my lengthy long legs and said “where is he? where is he?!!” “ “oh so you do know that man. “Of course I do he’s my trainer” I said.
“Oh no!” I said, I blocked my mouth with my long fingered hands are you… “Yes I am Corex the leader of the chimps but I’m not just any ordinary leader I’m the leader of the devil hungry chimps”. Suddenly Corex told me a little secret in my little ear “I killed your trainer”. “noooooo!!!” I screamed with tears of sadness dripping out of my big brown eyes. Until I started to change my whole body started to change and look like one of Corex’s worst, ugliest, devil, hungry chimp. “You can’t get away with this Corex” I said. To late I vanished into chimp horror world.
This shows me and my partners punctuation and vocabulary table. Witch means in our table we get to rate our own writing out of R1 to R7. Maybe if your doing writing you can rate yourself.
This shows me and my partners punctuation and vocabulary table. Witch means in our table we get to rate our own writing out of R1 to R7. Maybe if your doing writing you can rate yourself.
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